You have a drum line and a rhythm guitar. These are the first steps in achieving something far better. You need a melody to go with this as well as a base line if you can manage. Take pride that this small idea isn't complete junk. If you take a look at my music some of it is complete junk, but there are some gems in there to be proud of even if it's not a platinum song. Keep up the good work!

Typical self indulgent rap & hip-hop.

It's okay,.